Friday, October 5, 2018
Believe
What if humans were not stupid,
How nice would it be ?
No sexual harassment, no fear,
Womens could always live in peace.
Please don't be stupid,
Believe in gender equality.
What if humans were not bad,
How lovely would it be ?
No need to get mad,
In discriminating against people's color of skin.
Please don't be bad,
Believe in the end of racism.
What if humans were not full of anger,
How wonderful would it be ?
No judgement if you love him or her,
No violence to be.
Please don't be full of anger,
Believe in love.
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Oh! It is a very attractive poem. I like very much the repetition of the beginning and of the end!
ReplyDeleteThank you and congratulations!
The poem is very interesting because talk about the differents aspects of utopia , for exemple no violence , no judge ... For me is the very good and beautiful poem .
ReplyDeleteYour poem is defending a lot of actual topics, sexism, racism and others descrimintaions. The messages are very strong and easy to understand!
ReplyDeleteEven if believing in these ideas are quite difficult in our world, let's keep hope thanks to your work.
Excellent job !
It's a very good poem who touched me. Congratulations !
ReplyDeleteYour poem addresses 3 themes that touch me a lot: love, equality of the sexes, and the end of racism. The writing is fluid, as for the message of this poem is clear. It's a beautiful poem Emma, congratulations!
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